Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Action 4 Investigates Officers in Trouble


This is a poor title. Doesn't anyone edit these things?

---- Reports of Arrests of Jailers or Peace Officers ---- An interesting article. I wonder what the numbers are for the nation?

567 for 2010 (as of June) in Texas seems high but I am not surprised. How many jailers/Peace Officers are there in Texas?

Monday, August 9, 2010

The edit and second draft

I skimmed through the first draft with mixed feelings. I've made some minor corrections and made little notations. I feel the first part of the novel was a bit slow and akward but it does pick up some. The ending needs to be redone but I've already figured out how I want it to end.

I am now on a mission to expand the novel. There is a lot of work that needs to be done. :/ This is not a surprise. I was expecting this and now is the time to make the changes and fixes that are needed.